IDO
By
Madilyn Davidson
INT. HOUSE - MIDDAY
The room
is dark and dusty, the old potter, IDO, sits at his desk, face in hand staring
at a half finished Kantharos vase.
Bread
crumbs cover his desk from a previous meal, the floor is strewn with broken
pots and his bed is unmade and dishevelled.
There is
a loud bang as the door swings open, a large wealthy patrician, AMOS, fills the
doorway.
AMOS
Ido! I
need a vase
IDO
What kind?
AMOS scans
the room his eyes settling on the Kantharos vase and he points with authority
AMOS
That
vase. But with me on
the front
eh?
AMOS
strikes an exaggerated pose IDO’s eyes are distant as he stares through the
vase in front of him
AMOS
If you
can’t I’ll find a
potter to
live here who can
IDO
(Shakes and nods his head)
No, I-i-i
can do it
IDO
closes his eyes, the unfinished Kantharos vase sits on the desk
FADE TO WHITE:
INT. HOUSE – LATE NIGHT
The Kantharos
is portrayed in flickering candle light and a young women, ELLISA, concentrates
intensely on painting the vase.
FADE TO WHITE:
INT. HOUSE – MIDDAY
IDO is in
the same seat as ELISSA, tears form in his eyes
SLAM CUT TO:
IN. HOUSE – AFTERNOON
IDO sits
at the potter’s wheel, he begins to form a shape but the vase collapses in on
itself
His fist
comes down on the wheel sending wet clay out of the shot.
FADE TO BLACK:
EXT. HOUSE – NIGHT
IDO is outlined
through the window of his house, a candle flickers on his face as he sits alone
at the wheel
SLAM CUT TO:
INT. HOUSE – MORNING
AMOS
comes through the door and IDO is on the floor, his head hung in shame as he
holds a crooked mess up towards AMOS
AMOS
You’re
spose to be the best!
This is
all you have for me?
IDO
S-sorry, please I beg you,
give me
another chance!
AMOS HUMPHS
and turns his back leaving the room
AMOS
One more
chance
FADE TO BLACK:
INT. HOUSE- AFTERNOON
IDO is at
the wheel again with a lump of clay in front of him. His eyes are closed.
FADE TO WHITE:
INT. HOUSE – AFTERNOON
INT. HOUSE – AFTERNOON
ELLISA
sits at the wheel with IDO behind her, clay covers her face and sticks to her
hair.
She
begins to form a vase but it collapses in on itself and she laughs. IDO smiles
behind her and reaches round.
Their
hands together form a shape on the wheel
FADE TO WHITE:
INT. HOUSE – EVENING
IDO
smiles and admires the finished vase on the wheel.
FADE TO
BLACK:
INT.
SYMPOSIUM – EVENING
Lavish curtains cover the walls. A platter of grapes and bread
is spread across a table and we can hear AMOS talking as the Kantharos comes
into view, silhouette of AMOS is painted on the side
AMOS
… and that
was how I defeated
the Great
Tobius, saving each
of your
miserable lives! So in
my honour I
toast that we may
continue to
live as kings!
AMOS’s hand reaches for the vase and grasps the handles. He
holds the vase to his lips and drinks its contents, wine slipping down his
chins.
Finishing the wine AMOS lets out a sigh and throws the vase.
It falls in slow motion to the ground and shatters into pieces.
IDO is beside it broken pieces in his hands.
IDO’s face is shocked and distraught, until one piece stands out
to him, it still holds the silhouette of AMOS.
We end on IDO’s face as he smiles to himself and closes his
eyes.
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