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“Ido”
By Madilyn Davidson
FADE IN:
INT. HOUSE – MIDDAY
The old weathered potter, IDO, is sitting at
his desk, face in hand staring at a half finished kantharos. There are bread crumbs all over his desk from his unfinished
lunch, the floor is strewn with broken pots and his bed is unmade and
dishevelled.
There is a loud bang at the door, it swings
open, a large wealthy patrician, AMOS, fills the doorway. He demands IDO make a new kantharos identical to that on his
desk for the symposium or he will be banished.
FADE TO WHITE:
INT. HOUSE – LATE NIGHT
A beautiful young woman is painting a kantharos, the very same one from IDO’s desk.
FADE TO BLACK:
INT. HOUSE – MIDDAY
IDO is staring at the kantharos, tears form in his eyes.
INT. HOUSE – AFTERNOON
IDO sits at his potter’s wheel, each time he
starts to form the shape of the vase it collapses in on itself,
he slams his fist into the clay sending bits everywhere.
FADE TO BLACK:
EXT. HOUSE – NIGHT
IDO is still at his wheel through the window,
the candle flickers on his troubled face.
FADE TO BLACK:
INT.
HOUSE – MORNING
AMOS arrives to
see his vase, IDO presents a crooked mess and hangs his head in shame begging
for another chance to prove himself. AMOS agrees but
scowls as he leaves.
INT. HOUSE – AFTERNOON
IDO returns to the wheel, his eyes are closed
his clay lay in front of him.
FADE TO WHITE:
INT. HOUSE – AFTERNOON
IDO and ELLISA are
sitting at the wheel, she is trying to make a vase and laughs as it fails. Ido smiles and puts his hands
over hers and together they form a vase shape.
FADE TO BLACK:
INT. HOUSE – EVENING
IDO smiles and admires the finished vase on
the wheel.
FADE TO BLACK:
INT.
SYMPOSIUM – EVENING
IDO now lounges at the
symposium, lavish drapery surrounds him, AMOS stands beside the vase placed on
a pedestal. He is in the middle of a speech about himself. Toasting the room he
takes up the vase and finishes the wine, subsequently smashing the vase on the
ground into a thousand pieces. IDO is shocked and first begins to scramble for
the pieces. He picks up a large piece with the outline of AMOS still visible. IDO
smiles to himself and closes his eyes.
FADE TO BLACK
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